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I DisAgree

I DisAgree

A Poem by Frank Purcell

Your thoughts, your opinions, your views
you think I lack the right to choose
Your orders, commands with force
Does the bitching leave you hoarse?

Your over thinking of unnecessary worries
Your lack of the ability for sorries
Your constant moaning and groaning, and
Your inability to listen or understand

Your self-righteousness, and whats worse
You keep at it like it's a curse
Your vision, always lacking the peripheral
Pushing points as if they always personal

Speech bubbles, where thought bubbles never float
Shoving your opinions down my throat
Your failure at the simplest analysis
Leaves me in constant frustrated paralysis


© 2011 Frank Purcell


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sometimes people write poems with their mind set on rhyming and so it sounds forced even though it rhymes, your poem just makes it seem natural, like it's how we're meant to sound and it rolls off the tongue! Thank you for the request, I'm glad to read your work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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thats how i feel like that everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sometimes people write poems with their mind set on rhyming and so it sounds forced even though it rhymes, your poem just makes it seem natural, like it's how we're meant to sound and it rolls off the tongue! Thank you for the request, I'm glad to read your work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I really like this poem, Extremely Powerful writing. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow..extremely powerful write.. vent, vent..it's healthy.. You penned these emotions very well..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could feel the frustration in these words. Sometime even a patience person can be tested. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, very nice! I really feel the frustration building up the end, and the exasperation towards whoever you are speaking to in the poem. Powerful, but quietly slow, like muttering under your breath.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the originality of this piece and the line: "Does the bitching leave you hoarse?" is just magic. Great piece here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Frank Purcell
Frank Purcell

Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa



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Been writing poems since i was 12. They have been my best and most consistent friend. http://www.facebook.com/frank.tj.purcell more..

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