Come back

Come back

A Poem by Sweet

Hello dear Happiness. Where have you been? 
All I feel is loneliness. You're nowhere to be seen. 

I thought you'd be mine, and I'd always be yours. 
That our mornings would shine, while enjoying the outdoors. 

But now you're gone, and I'm left sinking. 
The light that once shone, only keeps on decreasing. 

I thought I was fine, that I was moving on. 
I thought I'd be alright, but so much's going on. 

My heart misses you, there's no joy left in it. 
My mind thinks of you, day and night you're in it. 

The memories and songs, I can't bare anymore. 
Everything links to you and stabs me to the core. 

Your voice resounds in my head, wish I could hear it again. 
Your absence causes me dread, left a hole that brings pain. 

Now I'm going to sleep, and try to drown all this ache. 
Wish I could hear your lullabies, that used to kept me awake. 

Although the emptiness kills me, I have hope, oh sweet bane, 
That you'll come back into my life, and make me feel whole again.

© 2016 Sweet



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You have that way of writing that makes me wish it'd never end! You always throw a curve in the second line that makes me wonder how you'll finish the rhyme.

"The memories and songs, I can't bare anymore.
Everything links to you and stabs me to the core." - great stanza! It has imagery and powerful feelings.



Posted 1 Year Ago


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Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

:) Have a Sweet day!
Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thanks you too ^_^
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)



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I love it but my favorite is the second verse because I love the outdoors and I loved the way you put it in!

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R

1 Year Ago

Me not so much hiking more like hunting and fishing hahaha but a long the same lines :b
Sweet

1 Year Ago

Lol, that's interesting, never tried neither ^_^
R

1 Year Ago

Both really fun and relaxing!
You have that way of writing that makes me wish it'd never end! You always throw a curve in the second line that makes me wonder how you'll finish the rhyme.

"The memories and songs, I can't bare anymore.
Everything links to you and stabs me to the core." - great stanza! It has imagery and powerful feelings.



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

:) Have a Sweet day!
Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thanks you too ^_^
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
There you go again so well placed theemotions... Yes, leting go to be alive is the goal but memories intrude and prick your heart and memories... Where is hapliness, hiding? Well penned thank you
miss sweet!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts ^_^ I really enjoy reading them. Seeing people's perspective is .. read more
A deep longingnesss for happiness and hope prevails in the poem... I know exactly what it feels to be without happiness and hope in life, it's like living without soul... This is so beautifully to expressed, a thought provoking write which I believe many readers can relate to their life...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet

1 Year Ago

It's always nice to read your thoughts. Thank you for sharing them ^_^
This is so emotional and wonderfully written. Such a good poem.

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Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thank you Tamika. I'm happy you liked it.

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Tags: Love, pain, heartache, sad, struggle, loneliness

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