Unrequited Love, nothing but a Lie

Unrequited Love, nothing but a Lie

A Poem by Sweet
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I wrote this for the contest "Poetry in 3 lines" Not sure if it's really still going on, but it was fun to do either way.

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Longing for what cannot be obtained, and
Imagining what cannot be attained, while
Embracing loneliness and suffering

© 2016 Sweet



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Affirmative! I know that all to well. Your poem is simple, well put and true!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thanks ^_^ I feel you on this. I wrote this more for fun, for a contest that never ended lol. Glad i.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome! :)
Hard to want something we cannot have. You said a lot in the short poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading it :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
I can understand the emotions of this write, unrequited love is never easy, it takes a big heart to do that... It's like walking on fire knowing that it will burn... To the point write... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reviewing this poem Dhiman. I agree, it's something very difficult to deal with, even .. read more
I would suggest using lie in the title. Maybe "The Lie of Unrequited Love'.

Posted 1 Year Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet

1 Year Ago

Hello Kuro. Thank you very much for your review. I'm kinda busy this week but will definitely look i.. read more

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Added on April 30, 2016
Last Updated on May 14, 2016
Tags: Unrequited, Love, sad, loneliness, lie, pain, contest

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