A New Beginning

I admit I am not yet totally

moved on with my past

I know I am still isolated

and I think it will lasts

I want to continue my life

I want to get over him

But how can I do that

If I can't get rid of him

I want to start all over again

Without him in my life

I know the consequence

And that's not to laugh

I am really hurt of what he did

It tears me apart and left broken

I want to take revenge on him

To tell him the words left unspoken

I am still now on the 

Process of forgetting

And I hope I can start

A new beginning

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice inspiration from your author's note, and nice write. A real happening within life, hurt, love... nice emotion in this. You touched onto the feelings nicely.

[khalid]

very nice poem but i think in the fourth line it is better if last instead of lasts, i know it is a typing mistake

[Tamia123]

Heart break hurts more then any broken bone can :( This showed all that emotion good job!

[Rylan Leif]

I enjoy the anger that builds up near the end. I can really feel your emotion. Well done!

[SuicidePact.]

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