Unanchored Moments

Unanchored Moments

A Poem by SyberRose
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Artist/Karen Conine

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Lips of sunset kiss trade winds goodbye
ship of fools upon tides of lullaby
Unanchored moments adrift in the night
whispers navigate in sea of moonlight
Clinging seaweed upon a wistful branch
a tear still hoping for another chance
Soft echoes tangled in net of debris
washed away driftwood haunting blue sea's
 A coral heart filled with treasures of love
lost without a trace like scent of foxglove 
Tucked away somewhere in a surreal dream
castaway thoughts and shipwrecked moonbeams
 Sad thoughts tease at the mention of your name
love is the only sea creature to blame.

 

©SyberRose

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
Thank you for reading.

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I looked for unanchored moments, but found
unanchored nostalgia. Memories adrift on a
sea of silken threads which bind the writer
to the one
Dozing late at night listening to the slap of halyards
on the mast and the foghorns booming on the reef as
a heavy mist lies anchoring us to our dreams.
We drift away in the arms of old love and then with
morpheus captured.
I love your poem. It is largely about old love , but it
always floats across the boats and out to sea for me.
Thank you---- a very refined anchor.
----- Eagle Cruagh


Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much John...I thought you might like it...and thank you for that lovely response...Rose.. read more
I really love this one, this is a PERFECT poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much...I appreciate you nice comment:)Rose
inkofme

10 Years Ago

Okay no problem!
This was magnificent! :) I loved it, you're an amazing write, Rose! Well done, hunny. Hugss

~ Noodle

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Noodle...glad you liked it and appreciate the sweet comments from you...Rose:)
Wow! Nice one. I remember one of my poems upon reading the line "ship of fools upon tides of lullaby".

Love really has to be guided/anchored to the right direction.

Good job, SyberRose!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you D...nice to hear from you tonight...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
"clinging seaweed" "coral heart"

"love is the only sea creature to blame"

yes, in a sea of possibilities...there has to be a sea creature that is love...that way the current will be smooth...

really nice piece.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob...I'm happy you enjoyed...nice to hear from you this evening...Rose:)
i will bet you are very proud of this write, because it is the bomb! this is very good! going into my faves, now!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Quin...Im glad you liked...:) Rose
quinfinn

10 Years Ago

loved it!
"a tear still hoping for another chance
Soft echoes tangled in net of debris
washed away driftwood haunting blue sea's
A coral heart filled with treasures of love"
You are right. Love has to be anchored , otherwise it will drift and float away into unchartered waters blown by the winds of uncertainty...A wonderful write...:)


Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami...always nice to see you peeking in and thank you for your
sweet comme.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

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Added on May 31, 2013
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SyberRose

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