Would You?

Would You?

A Poem by SyberRose
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Painting by Billie Feng

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Would you like to spend the night?
listening to the raindrops fall
While the ecstasy of the rain
flows with passion down the wall~

Would you like to spend the night?
wrapped in my love so warm
While the candle flickers with desire
while our shadows tremble in the storm~

Would you like to spend the night?
in our dark wonderland
And the only thing I wear
is just one pearl on a strand~

Would you like to spend the night?
under a canopy of lace
On ivory sheets of satin
in our silhouetted embrace~

©SyberRose

© 2013 SyberRose



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SyberRose
Thank you for reading.

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A sweet poem, beautifully written. Very nice rose.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much and have a nice day...Rose:)
No one would love this, this is so romantically written

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cassie

4 Years Ago

I meant to say no wouldnt love this...
SyberRose

4 Years Ago

I know what you meant haa
Cassie

4 Years Ago

Hahaha hahah
wow this is a really well written poem such sweet words :) well done. i enjoyed reading this one :) keep writing :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you Mark...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...Rose:)
mark

4 Years Ago

i did and ur welcome...mark
this was extremely romantic and very sweet. About anyone in particular or? the title was great and the way it was set out was great. I quite enjoyed reading that

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you...No it was just a poem dear...but I'm glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Years Ago

ur most welcome :)
Wow what a beautiful poem. Enjoyed it VERY much. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you Betty...I'm happy you liked it...Rose
nicely penned, great job once again, keep writing.100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you Rahul...so nice of you to visit my poetry again this morning...I do appreciate it and Ill .. read more
Love it! You're such a good writer

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your nice comments...I just think of myself as a poet...:)
 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Okay well I rephrase you're such a good poet,without a doubt!
This is an enticing and luring invitation so chosen lovers can walk through the doors of pleasurable sensuality after dark. A fine write and read. Nice work. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you Bpoet...I appreciate your visit as always...Rose:)

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SyberRose

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Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..

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