Sweet Lyrics

 

 

   

 

It was a special time to remember

a scent of effervescent love~

 

The sweet lyrics  (See you in September)

 

had teardrops flowing like a mourning dove

 

And as April showers brought May flowers

and the heat of summertime bloomed~

 

(roses are red and violets are blue)

 

The sweet garden of love was doomed

 

 As golden mums and purple crocus

peeked through the Autumn ground~

 

Tears flowed from eyes of blue lotus

as sienna leaves fell without a sound~

 

It was a special time to remember

within smoldering leaves of September.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my! such sweet sorrow ..i can almost taste those flower tears .. well done my friend .. what a sublime and wondrous journey of the senses ... nice one!
R.

[Diane Lockard]

The blossoms bloom and fade, as the time passes too soon... Lovely images in picture and words...

I will drop by soon. Diane

[SyberRose]

Thank you Diane...nice to hear from you tonight...Rose:)

[Stella Armour]

gorgeous.. what else can i say..loved every line :o)

[SyberRose]

Glad you enjoyed dear...thanks for peeking in...hugss

[Shaun Payton]

Ahem, keeping my reading going Rose. Seems love can fade, or head for oblivion, but remembrance keeps a bitof it alive

[SyberRose]

Yes love never dies...it always lives on in the heart forever...thank you again Shaun...:)

[Shaun Payton]

You are most welcome Rose:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautifully written, love the imagery as I walked through the seasons.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Brandon...and thank you for visiting today...Rose:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

My pleasure, Ms. Rose...have a good one

[Onku Ghosh]

Very beautiful poem .LOved the line "And as April showers brought May flowers." has such a melodoius quality.Come autumn and it is time for the summer blooms to wilt and the trees to shed their leaves.just like love goes through highs and lows so also the once blooming garden soon turns bare.Through the imagery of the garden you have shown the fading away of love in a person's life.................and you are left with only memories.A short and charming write!!!!!!!!!!!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Onku...Its rains alot in April..and we have been getting alot of rain this month too...its pouring right now ha...Spring and autumn are my favorite seasons though...Rose:)

[Ency Bearis]

Lovely poem and melodious lyrics in a sense.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ency...nice to see you today...Rose:)

[Maria Ni Mhurchu]

A lovely poem Rose. I love the use of the flowers and the garden.
I think the Dove signifies hope but death is inevitable and that comes across succinctly.
The death of love deep in your heart. :(

[SyberRose]

thanks for peeking in Maria...glad you enjoyed...Rose

[quinfinn]

gorgeous, as always, dear Rose... your muse is definitely in good spirits and working overtime.

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Quin...and for peeking in this afternoon...Rose

[Pollai]

The vocabulary is beautiful :) a great read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Pollai and thanks for taking time to read...Rose:)