As The Sun Goes Down

As The Sun Goes Down

A Poem by SyberRose



Does the sun compete with the stars?


      while the moon covets from afar


Is the morning jealous of the night?


      as it yearns for moonlight~


Until the evenings rendezvous


       stealing a moment till adieu,


Although parting is sweet sorrow


      they long again for tomorrow~



 

When the heartbeat of temptation


      hides in shadows of disguise,


The brazing sun goes down


      and moon and stars arise~


They share the seabed of the ocean


      Ménage à trois of devotion~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 


© 2013 SyberRose



Author's Note

SyberRose
Thank you for reading

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so sexy ..absolutely adore the interactions ...pic is inspiring and fits to a "T" .. "...parting is sweet sorrow.." is brand new in the setting of your poem ..very much enjoyed this experience Syber! .. wish you would return and post anew :( but i am glad to find all these old posts i missed!
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lots of lovely questions in this one Rose...very whimsical! ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you so much Red...glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)
Beautifully written, thanks for sharing :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you Amanda for peeking in:)
I LOVE this image! Well done. Great rhyme and meter as with all your work [you do have an ear] and fantastic imagery. Brava Rose.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Hi Steve...thank you so much... i'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for peeking in...Rose:)
Great rhyme scheme! Please check out some of my poetry, particularly Dreams, You and You Mean So Much To Me

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you for peeking in today Daniel...Rose
How I have missed your work, my SyberRose- Sybernoodles has missed her fill of your splendid work accompanied by some lovely artwork that always takes my breath away, this was no different. You have left me staring at my screen - most likely looking weird - like it has just come alive!

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

And I have missed you too sweetie...and looking foward to reading more of your wonderful poems too.<.. read more
s y e

4 Years Ago

Woo! I have my other half back, yay! hugss
i completely loved this beautiful work of yours dear.....
not only the words, but also and most essentially the image swayed away my heart..:)
very very very well done

best wishes,
saumya

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you and so nice to see you Saumya...hugs
Saumya

4 Years Ago

youre welcome dear....:)
hugs to you too:)
mighty beautiful poem miss rose

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Baby...and for peeking in...Rose:)
What a beautiful poem about the dance between day and night. Those last two lines created a bow that tied the entire poem up perfectly.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much and I appreciate you taking time to read tonight...Rose:)

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SyberRose

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