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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Dewdrop Upon The Rose

Dewdrop Upon The Rose

A Poem by SyberRose

As the black sarong of a shadow falls

                the welcoming arms of evening are nigh

and the breeze of enchantment calls

                kissing  bosom of the sunset goodbye~

 

Yet, the moon upon the pillow of night

                leaves a dewdrop upon the rose

and tender wounds of the night heal

                as blue iris in the sky glows~

 

Within the ambiance of a heartbeat

                the roots of a weeping willow run deep

along the weary path of destiny

                where shadows of  fate sleep~

 

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
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Beautiful, your style is most lucid and a pleasure to follow through, well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sheema...and so nice of you to peek in today...Rose:)
The poets nature to find words like flowers bloom is evident in this rich poem of destines questions

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

thank you David for peeking in today...nice to hear from you...Rose:)
Always the consummate romantic, must be luverly to have a name! that lends itself so well too! :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much and good morning to you Frieda...hugs
This was very gentle and full of romantic notions. I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Joan...I'm glad you it enjoyed...Rose:)
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Very romantic and poetic Rose. Your words are far more refined than my own and you use them as a master sculpter uses their tools to sculpt a master piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for that lovely compliment...and i'm happy you enjoyed this Ron...Rose
I think you wrote this with a quill by candlelight. Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ken and I think I will try writing by candlelight one day...Rose
So much positive enlightenment in your words, full of tenderness and grace.
I especially love these lines...

Within the ambiance of a heartbeat
the roots of a weeping willow run deep

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dale...glad you liked this piece...Rose
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Always my pleasure Rose xo
Great personification in this one. "the black sarong of a shadow falls" WOW, what an image that creates for me, Rose! There is a poignant beauty to this poem. Really wonderful. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much again...I really appreciate your comments Lydi...so nice of you to visit this
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embracing the night; the moon ever a promise of light;

"Within the ambiance of a heartbeat

the roots of a weeping willow run deep"

I can swim in those lines!
what a great job Rose.
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you E...so nice to hear from you this morning and like the new picture...Rose
Einstein Noodle

10 Years Ago

your welcome...and Thank you!
Great read sweet Rose. Love it :)
Thanks for sharing :)
Well I loved the pic (Rose) more.
- Singh :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Singh...glad you liked both...Rose:)

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Added on September 5, 2013
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SyberRose

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