A Decollete Night

A Decollete Night

A Poem by SyberRose
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Nocturnal songs bloom with blending of souls

upon a decollete negligee night

a whisper of stars kiss softly our skin

as silhouettes tango in candlelight

 

 

Your sighs are pleasing like a nightingale

as if in Elysian fields we drift

and you are my bird of paradise

in an exotic vase of surrender~

 

And within ecstasy of sheet music

are the tears of crystal orb and rapture

flowing within rarity of our bliss,

and sweet fruit of our dew kissed lips.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 SyberRose



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SyberRose
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Wow! What I wouldn't give to be in this poem right now. Your giving me shivers.

Posted 9 Months Ago


A very romantic read. The words flow very well, and I could use these words when the time is right within that candlelight.....may I borrow them?

Posted 3 Years Ago


SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Yes you may ...ha...glad you liked them Daffy...and nice hearing from you.Rose:)
Daffy

3 Years Ago

your welcome, Rose....
Very nice. I liked the word choice a lot. It paints a very serene picture. Good job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sammi...and happy holidays to you...Rose:)
Really lovely word choice, Rose. You paired unsuspecting words and produced a beautiful poetic picture. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Blue and I appreciate your visit this morning...Rose:)
lovely, lovely similes and very well thought out for a short picture poem. I loved it, very nice...E.J.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Eric for taking time to comment...Rose:)
I see two waif like fairy-elves entwined in love dancing together in a clearing neath the light of a luminous moon, hidden away within a thickly wooded magical forest !

A beautiful image intensifying write SyberRose !

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it Tom...and thank you for your sweet comments as always...Rose:)
To leave one breathless you have achieved with this poetry. Its intoxicating romantical reading

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shaun Payton

3 Years Ago

:) I been sick and stuff. Getting better.
SyberRose

3 Years Ago

Happy new year to you Shaun...:)
Shaun Payton

3 Years Ago

Happy New Year Rose!:)
very sensual and romantic, I was thrown a bit by the rhyme pattern: abcb in the first verse, then no rhyme in the next two, but it is still beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

thank you Trace...yes sometimes i'm a rebel with the stanzas ha...Rose:)
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This is very romantic Rose. It sounds like the perfect night.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ron for peeking in...Rose:)
ron

4 Years Ago

You are most welcome Rose:)
It's as if jewels are engraved in each word my dear Rose! :) lovely piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SyberRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you Rafia...Rose:)

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Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..

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