Hold Me Up

Hold Me Up

A Poem by -TweetyBirdd.!-
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i was bored. haha

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Your words cut deep

Hurt worse than my knives

I sit here watching the blood

Hoping no one hears my cries.

 

Falling deeper and deeper

Into this hole

Wishing I could fly out

And get back my heart you stole.

 

Because no one can save me

Your the only one now

Who can hold me up

But you don't know how.


© 2010 -TweetyBirdd.!-



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-TweetyBirdd.!-
review plz!

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Excellent! This really looks like lyrics of a song! Wow, I've absolutely nothing bad to say about it ^^ Keep it up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


i can feel the emotion and over all its well put togather
good joob

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Your emotions are conveyed well here. Excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


E it!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2010
Last Updated on January 12, 2010
Tags: hold, me, up, hold me up, suicide, heartbreak

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-TweetyBirdd.!-
-TweetyBirdd.!-

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SYDNEY, (:. ^^^^^^^ yep, thts my name. xD ohkay so...about me.... Mostly, i revolve around music. some of the most awesomest bands ever are.. BROKENCYDE, My Chemical Romance, Escape The Fate, .. more..

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