Our Tree

i'm not sure what inspired this one. review plz.!

Running,

Fleeing,

Away from this place

Chasing,

Pacing,

Forgetting your face

 

Not making sense

Where am I now?

Trying to save myself

But I have no idea how

 

Lost this battle

Between you and me

You broke my heart

Left me crying under our tree

 

Once again,

I’ve lost to my emotions

Seems as I’m always under a spell,

Or perhaps a potion

 

You poison me

But the taste is sweet

I try to stay away

But you are someone

I can’t help but meet.

 

 

Author's Note

review plz.! tell me what i should change/edit/ if i should add/ etc.

Reviews

[snapstache]

i love it :) srry i havent been reviewing...you're really good and I'm proud to say I got you started writing...poems anyway :)