A White Dress

A White Dress

A Poem by Trevor Barnett

I saw a perfect shade of white
So elegant
That it must have been a figment
So elegant

Thump, Thump, Thump, Thump
Says the heart in my chest
When it sees you

The way it lays on you
Is stellar and sublime like the clouds in the sky
A white dress so perfect
That it blinds me with your radiating fairness
The whiteness of a soul
Is a cool shade of grey compared to your beauty

Tremble, Tremble
My knees are now dancing 
In your presence 

A rare sparkling jewel you are
Gleaming brightly
Like a white sun parting the clouds
Gleaming brightly 

© 2014 Trevor Barnett


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The whiteness of a soul
Is a cool shade of grey compared to your beauty
To be in love makes everything more beautiful. The comparison here is lovely Trevor and the last verse is stunning.
My new favorite by you. You have touched my heart with the beauty of your words.
:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Wow! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this write! Thank you so much for the review Julie.



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Absolutely beautiful Trevor, each line speaks volumes of the love you feel for her.
My new favorite by you, sweet man. Lovely work as always.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tracey for the wonderful comment!
Pure and burning with passion, this poem makes for a refreshing read with the unconventional flow but it fit so well as to get your thoughts across :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks so much for taking the time to comment on it!
This is not really a review buddy, but just a word of appreciation to this great piece. We are always happy when we know someone has read and felt our piece. Well done friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful comment Yann! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
and with this piece...
the lines have just enough...
to allocate the lines...
and give in more as the words...
present themselves...
about the subject matter of affection...


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for for your patience for all of your reviews! I'm thrilled you enjoy my writing.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

You're welcome...Its the persistence in me...I want to learn more...and see what others are crafting.. read more
Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Well, you'll definitely learn a lot that way my friend! I can't wait to return the favor, and learn .. read more
The whiteness of a soul
Is a cool shade of grey compared to your beauty
To be in love makes everything more beautiful. The comparison here is lovely Trevor and the last verse is stunning.
My new favorite by you. You have touched my heart with the beauty of your words.
:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Wow! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this write! Thank you so much for the review Julie.
Trevor, awesome read Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Maria! I'm glad you liked it, and I look forward to reading your work.
maria  ( rose)

10 Years Ago

your welcome! and yes, stop by anytime would love to hear from you.
-maria
Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Will do Maria!
This is really well done:) great work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much A. Amos! I look forward to reading your work.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend
I liked the lines. Sure say it to a girl...she will never say no....lol!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Hopefully she wouldn't lol! Thank you for the review!
"A rare sparkling jewel you are

Gleaming brightly

Like a white sun parting the clouds

Gleaming brightly;

You are gleaming brightly as a poet and a lover. beautiful...:).................



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Sami! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for taking the time to review!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)....................

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Trevor Barnett
Trevor Barnett

Glencoe, AL



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My name is Trevor Barnett; and, writing is a hobby of mine. My true passion is art; that being said, I will be attending Savannah School of Art and Design(SCAD) this fall for animation. If there's any.. more..

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