A Devil's call

Characters of making an evil person

In the dark alley
He was standing alone
He was beaten on the pavement
He became a waste
He became a nuisance

A man with nothing
A man with emptiness
A shattered dreams
A pitch black path

Becoming one with sorrow
Becoming one with pain
Becoming something very foul
Becoming something very evil

No one found his heart
No one found his dreams
No one found his fate
No one found his destiny

Having a malicious rage
Having a killing intent
Having no fear inside
Having nothing to lose

He rises from the dark
He picks his weapons
He stabs and pull the trigger

While he was doing this
The person begs for his life
He pleaded for mercy
But his cries are in vain

As the person dies
He has answered an evil's call
And he became the devil himself

Author's Note

What do you think of this style of writing please let me know

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

I think you did very well with this style, Terrence. The repetitive nature suits your writing very well. Magnificent poetry. :)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you falling leaf

[Jamestown]

This one was pretty nuts as well, written well though, check out evil lies, pride and
evil reign if you have time, thanks for sharing, b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

I do like the repetition of the first words in the poem
Makes it really, unique and doesn't keep the reader off too.
the last line shock me, I was like: "Wow" "That was deep!"
Beautiful and interesting poem Terrence, a enjoyable poem to read

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Lizardo. I am glad that you liked my works

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[wordman]

this is certainly a sad one

[Terrence Chang]

Yeap it is. I was doing my research on psychology of serial killer and mass murderer when I wrote it down. The research was for my personal knowledge

[wordman]

I think the more you learn the less you know
it`s impossible to follow satan