Horror in Co-incident

This is seriously not ment for feint hearted

I was walking down
In an empty dark street
The streetlights did not seem to work
The dogs were howling at someone
But then a light began to blink
I saw this old lady
Who wore a dirty torn clothe
One hand holds
The broken leg
I was frozen in fear
Waiting for her to disappear

The next night I saw her again
But this time facing towards me
The other hand was holding a dead child
The front clothes was drenched in blood
Her skull was open to see the brain
With a the jaw ripped her tongue was hanging in the air
She had several deep cuts on her face
And the eyes was covered in red
As she was crying in blood

My body became white
I felt my body cold like a dead corpse
I wanted to scream
But I was paralyzed in fear
No sense could bring me back
My sanity was in question at that track

I could feel her aura
Which was the path of Asura
She calls my name
And begins to question"Where is my child?"
I said nothing to her
For I saw the dead child
For he had an ominous smile
She said it again "Grandchild are you there?...."
Right after saying this she vanished into thin air

Next day I read the news
Which shocked my views
The old lady that I saw is actually dead
She died day before yesterday
Along with a baby which she was holding that same hand
She died in the same street
Just a moment ago before I could see
In a truck accident
Which cannot be just an incident

Author's Note

An incident that happened with me.

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Another great little dark piece I really enjoyed the descriptions of the woman, there are a couple of language and spelling errors you need to edit (I can tell English is not your first language) well done thank for sharing - ATC

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Ally. The thing is that English is my first preference. But my problem is my dyslexic mind. Which from time to time gets the best of me. If you show me the grammatical and vocabulary errors I could improve.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Im dyslexic too so i pick it up in other peoples but not my own! Im on holiday at the moment but if you send me a message reminder il go through and check your work if you like :)

[Confuser]

Hope to goodness sakes, you didn't see this. Wow, Chang, great writing and I could not move or blink. I was stuck there in fear as I read your words. At first I read old lady, thought it was me. HA, but no tattered clothes. What great frightening work you have done here. Chills up and down my spine. My son would love it but too gorey. I must say, however, great writing. Keep it up. Thank you. Enjoyed every single word. WOW! How vivid your descriptions are. Great story!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Confuser. But the problem is that this has really happened to me and the news shocked me up real bad. There is more to it. But I did not write more about it since it was unbearable to describe. Hope you understand.

[Confuser]

I am speechless: change subject please: Must read from Rudy's book stone, is you like to read, great book, he's on my friend's list, also a younger girl named Bella, wonderful writer. Bye.

[Terrence Chang]

Ok will read hers also

[Confuser]

A man, and when it comes to language and words, remember you can do anything. Rudy is Dutch and translates to English. His poems are unreal. So are yours! Bella, wow, so many, look at the new writers, on Helping Hearts, Emily lists writings to be read. You and i will learn together, so many talented people here.