What made me

What made me

A Poem by Terrence Chang

I am not allowed here
I don't belong to this place
Even though I have a space
I am not allowed here

I am a wandering man
I wander now in everywhere
Even though I have a home
I am a wandering man

I am a man of sadness
I follow towards solitude
Even though I feel love
I am a man of sadness

I am a man of amnesia
I serve no one's memories
Even though I have a name
I am a man of amnesia

I am that what made me
I flow now with no emotions
Even though I have a soul
I am that what made me


© 2015 Terrence Chang



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Terrence Chang
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A bit solemn.... I like the straight forward, naked feel of this poem. It is sad when confronted with identity as an illusion or at least constructed.

I enjoyed reading,
Best Mai

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like the style of your poem, the first and last lines of your stanzas gave it a unique flavor and a nice a flow and rhythm to it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much stanger for you kind review.
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Gee
Itchy feet,no place to lay his hat.....liked this Terence

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Gee for your review
Yes, we are all part and parcel of the things we have experienced in addition to our genes and heredity. Your poetry is a bit dark, but well written. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Ms Lydia for your wise words. But I prefer it to write dark stuff. Maybe that is .. read more
Lydia

1 Year Ago

Indeed....you write very well so keep going.
great work... enjoyed this :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Bhavya
sometimes we just gotta be free, great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

Thank you soo much Wordman
they say "home is where the heart is"
but for some of us...the heart is too restless and just can't seem to settle anywhere---always roving and looking for something...

i felt this one, Terrence...


j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

Thank you soo much Mr Jacob. Thank you for your generous review
I really like it!!
Well done!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

Thank you soo much Emily
I did enjoy reading this ;)amazing write :)
thanks 4 sharing !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

Thank you soo much Zaisha

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Added on October 13, 2015
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Tags: philosophy, man, memories, experience, lonely, space

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Terrence Chang
Terrence Chang

Mumbai, Maharashtra , India



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My aim is to be a novel writer and a screen writer. And I try to hone my skills through writing poetry. Everything I did as a writer is all self thought. And I feel that it is time for me to step up t.. more..

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