What made me

I am not allowed here
I don't belong to this place
Even though I have a space
I am not allowed here

I am a wandering man
I wander now in everywhere
Even though I have a home
I am a wandering man

I am a man of sadness
I follow towards solitude
Even though I feel love
I am a man of sadness

I am a man of amnesia
I serve no one's memories
Even though I have a name
I am a man of amnesia

I am that what made me
I flow now with no emotions
Even though I have a soul
I am that what made me

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy your read

Reviews

[Mai L Nissen]

A bit solemn.... I like the straight forward, naked feel of this poem. It is sad when confronted with identity as an illusion or at least constructed.

I enjoyed reading,
Best Mai

[Leo]

I like the style of your poem, the first and last lines of your stanzas gave it a unique flavor and a nice a flow and rhythm to it

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much stanger for you kind review.

[Gee]

Itchy feet,no place to lay his hat.....liked this Terence

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Gee for your review

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, we are all part and parcel of the things we have experienced in addition to our genes and heredity. Your poetry is a bit dark, but well written. Lydi**

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Ms Lydia for your wise words. But I prefer it to write dark stuff. Maybe that is who I am

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed....you write very well so keep going.

[bhavya]

great work... enjoyed this :)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Bhavya

[wordman]

sometimes we just gotta be free, great write

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Wordman

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they say "home is where the heart is"
but for some of us...the heart is too restless and just can't seem to settle anywhere---always roving and looking for something...

i felt this one, Terrence...


j.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Mr Jacob. Thank you for your generous review

[Emily]

I really like it!!
Well done!!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[zaisham9393]

I did enjoy reading this ;)amazing write :)
thanks 4 sharing !!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Zaisha