Infidelity

Infidelity

A Poem by Terrence Chang

Between the thousand days
And one bright moon
There was a blunder
That kept my relationship on the line

Dull of me to put you in jeopardy
As dim lights were lit
A stupid mistake that I commit
To which I cannot erase

You have the authority
To punish me however you like
But just one thing
Don't leave me as a punishment

Your tears are precious
I don't know how to atone
But let me start by saying
"I am truly sorry" 

My vocabulary cannot express
The guilt that I am facing
But my convictions to make up
Is far greater than any mission so far

I know that you are hurted
But please let me make it up for you
I am willing to crawl everyday
Slowly making each steps count

Give me a chance to come back
I know that our relationship is crumbled
And I am not asking for a complete new page
But let me start by writing

"I Love You !"

© 2016 Terrence Chang



Author's Note

Terrence Chang
Hope you all like what I have written.
Although I have never been in an relationship. I always wondered, about what would I do if I confess or get caught in action. Would you forgive my mistake

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I love the sincerity of this poem and the imagery reflects the tone well.
Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Bisco for your kind review.
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Terrence, For never having been in a relationship, your writing is so heart rending it doesn't show. A few spelling mistakes but for having English as a second language this is no big deal. Very well written. take care...dan

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Dan for your kind and generous review towards me.
I loved the poem and the ending!
Keep it up!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Emily
All actions have consequences. You have described betrayals marvelously and with a precision take. Excellent, sir....:))))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Mr Sami for your review
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome .....:))))
Wow...nice poem. Liked the structure which was written a bit like a letter. You can truly tell that the person is sorry for the mistake he committed. But should the betrayed one forgive him? I'm not sure about that... hope U thought about the ending in your head :)
Thanks for sharing anyway

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much guy
what !! shoot his a*s honey . well since your showing remorse ,and if it`s true remorse
she might over look this indiscretion,however she will never fully trust you again !

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Wordman. You are one hundred percent right on the take of your review. So it is u.. read more
I think if you cheat then you aren't meant to be in the (original) relationship to begin with and all the 'ooh but I couldn't help myself' is all poppycock. Having said that everyone deserves a second chance but yeah I would forgive you Terrence after this declaration of love

Posted 1 Year Ago


Terrence Chang

1 Year Ago

Thank you soo much Anto for your kind review. You truly have a big heart.
ANTO

1 Year Ago

Now get with the back rubbing... lol
your welcome Terrence

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Added on February 29, 2016
Last Updated on February 29, 2016
Tags: sorry, infidelity, cheating, cheat, cheater

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Terrence Chang
Terrence Chang

Mumbai, Maharashtra , India



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My aim is to be a novel writer and a screen writer. And I try to hone my skills through writing poetry. Everything I did as a writer is all self thought. And I feel that it is time for me to step up t.. more..

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