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Embracing All

Embracing All

A Poem by Tonya

Embracing All

Light that lies deep inside of me

Come forth in all thy majesty

Show me thy gaze

Teach me thy ways

That I a better person may be

Darkness that lies deep inside of me

Come forth in all thy mystery

Show me thy gaze

Teach me thy ways

That I a better person may be

Love that lies deep inside of me

Come forth in all thy unity

Let me be thy gaze

Let me teach thy ways

That I a better person may be



© 2015 Tonya



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very poetic and heartfelt, like the flow as well. this is very well written

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tonya

7 Months Ago

Thank you for reading my work.
It is heartfelt, and a good poem. It does lack some grammar, but otherwise, it is great.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tonya

7 Months Ago

Thank you, The poem is one of my first poems i have ever written
TheBrokenOnes166

7 Months Ago

For a first time poet, it is really good then. You did an amazing job. ︵‿︵(´ ͡༎ຶ ͜ʖ .. read more
Tonya

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much

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Added on May 26, 2015
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Tonya

Beloit, WI



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