Embracing All

Embracing All

Light that lies deep inside of me

Come forth in all thy majesty

Show me thy gaze

Teach me thy ways

That I a better person may be

Darkness that lies deep inside of me

Come forth in all thy mystery

Show me thy gaze

Teach me thy ways

That I a better person may be

Love that lies deep inside of me

Come forth in all thy unity

Let me be thy gaze

Let me teach thy ways

That I a better person may be

Reviews

[Rye]

very poetic and heartfelt, like the flow as well. this is very well written

[Tonya]

Thank you for reading my work.

[TheBrokenOnes166]

It is heartfelt, and a good poem. It does lack some grammar, but otherwise, it is great.

[Tonya]

Thank you, The poem is one of my first poems i have ever written

[TheBrokenOnes166]

For a first time poet, it is really good then. You did an amazing job. ︵‿︵(´ ͡༎ຶ ͜ʖ ͡༎ຶ `)︵‿︵

[Tonya]

Thank you so much