Send Them Love

Send Them Love

A Poem by TL Boehm
"

first random poetic moment of the year...

"

Scribbled epithets

Pressed wet with tears

Sacred spaces carried by hallowed hands

Whispered winds that hover

Can't cover this fragile soul

Fractured by the passage of years

Each stone a death remembered

Casual depravity

Swarming queenless

Cyclonic before the storm

The walls we build

Never strong enough to stop the tide

Empty breath

Bubbles up to a silent sky

Potential of a life unlived

Slips beneath the surface

Swirling backwater memories

Heavy with fresh earth and leaves

Surrender the imprint

Of your body to oblivion

I can only wish you peace

I know will not come

Forever beyond

My aching grasp

If I could pull you

Warm inside

Some secret place

An open heart

Rubbed smooth

Sweet balm for your weary soul

I’ve lost you to the droning insanities

Shipwrecks and effigies

Cast up on the shore

You are forever dragging chains

No ascension

No freedom

Fruit plucked

Before the ripening

Bitter offering

For barren ground

Always hungry for more

I scribble an epithet

Pressed wet with tears

Plastered prayers to fill the cracks

In my fractured soul

Surrender your memory

To the silent sky

Send them love....

Good bye...

 

TL Boehm

010809

For "May"

Inspired by the Book "The Secret Life of Bees"


© 2009 TL Boehm



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Author's Note

TL Boehm
no spoiling the book, but "May" broke my heart.

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very poetic and heart-wrenching.

you use a style that is classic yet all your own.

i love how the words flow because the aura of a poem is not defined by the words you choose after all. it's all about how you match the words and come up with an effective expressive style.

this well demonstrates my point.

well done and magnificent.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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I love the depth and the weaving of imagery. The slight alliteration and assonance adds beauty to this piece. Just powerful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The walls we build
Never strong enough to stop the tide

While reading this poem, I felt forced to break about every two lines. Which really wasn't a problem. It made me ponder every line deeper. The description is very true to life. Excellent work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I saw the movie recently and now the poem means so much more to me, I am impressed how perfectly you captured her pain from life's hand. I thought it was a wonderful piece the first time I read it, but now that i understand the character more, it is that much richer to me. Truly beautiful and sad.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is a classic read!
The walls we build

Never strong enough to stop the tide

Empty breath

Bubbles up to a silent sky

standing O!!!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My aching grasp
If I could pull you
Warm inside
Some secret place
An open heart
Rubbed smooth
Sweet balm for your weary soul

I really like this whole piece...The top seven lines really jumped out upon me as this could be the hub of this piece I think. As for me anyway. So much could be taken off into and upon another direction of this writing and bring it right back around as complete 360, capturing itself falling into the depths of the beginning of this wonderful poem and falling upon the net of its finish line of words.

Thank you for sharing.

Art

Posted 1 Year Ago


I thought that this piece of your creativity was excellent. It flows very well and easy to understand. I had a lot of emotion when I was done reading it. Thank you for publishing it for it was very good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful and very impressive write, I can really feel this and teh emotion behind it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand....

the walls we build
never strong enough to stop the tide.

I deal with this every day. It's good to understand.

Always,

April

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is brilliant. adored it. each word so strong and piercingly forming its meaning! excuse me my dear that I have forgotten you and didn't express my utter dankeschn for reading my poem a few days ago. hug, lara. Hope all is well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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AK
... this is absolutely gorgeous!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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