Battered in the name of Love

Battered in the name of Love

A Poem by TTBoy28

 

 

Roam inside my head

and head toward my heart

Pieces shatter

as tears are held back

Colorful rainbows

of painful reflections

Youth mugged of innocence

blind-sided by fists and

buckles and tortured boisterous

souls

Even down below they beg

 They plead for it to stop

Yet the stars shine so bright

and brighter as the drums get beaten


© 2012 TTBoy28



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I love the wordplay of "roam inside my head/ and head toward my heart". Also, just a suggestion, you may want to take the 'so' out of your second to last line to make it flow~write on!

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Added on July 11, 2012
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Tags: abuse, domestic abuse, innocence, reflections

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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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I am the former TTBoy. I am Buddhist. I write only the truth as I see it. This may sound ridiculous to some, but sometimes the truth gets in the way. The truth shall set you free. I try to be ad.. more..

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