Farewell, my End

I see You there
All skin and bone
Blowing ash as You sit
on nothing
Your squealing makes me weak
for You
I wouldn’t trade places right now
You played
And I stayed so put
‘Til I got to know myself
If only You hadn’t strayed
I wouldn’t have a bony heart
My heart could not follow
You underground
Thick You then were
Cutting through like You were in Class
Lover Bully
Then, You grabbed something else
Or someone else found You
Was the good prize worth it?
But, I promised to see You through
And through you are
I see you there
Still, you are not alone
The memories take over me
Sad, because you have them
All skin and bone

Reviews

[Fede]

Wow. It's a great poem, I'm mesmerized. I can't find the words to describe what it made me feel, it's so perfect.

[Fede]

It made me remember the fragility of one's heart and feelings. Giving your heart and soul to someone yet discovering they are just skin and bone, unable to receive them.

[TTBoy28]

What a fantastic observation, Fede!