Still My Thrill

Still My Thrill

A Poem by ROXANE DORSEY

Baby darling, sweet baby.  I feel your love inside my heart.
Dear baby, oh sweet darling baby.
Your love thrills me.  Make me jump every time you and I
bump to the grind.
I can't get that thrill with no other.
Baby boy, yes, you are my dearest friend to the end.
Beauty it was in our beginnings of tales.
Love I fell in the middle, then you played me like a fiddle.
tweedle dee dum de dum dum your the dumb one. 
Love notes, I proposed!
String'd me along with that same ol' love song.
When it gave me the blues, I had to choose.
Karma's a b*tch on a bungee string.
I'll be the last woman to sing, "You're still a girl's thrill."  


© 2017 ROXANE DORSEY



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Sometimes a girl just keeps on coming back for more even when she knows she's being played because it's just sooo good she can't help herself and o'boy do you know how to sing it Roxane "the gotta have it blues", you're such a beautiful writer I love reading you -- thanks so truly for the goodtime sharing! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

PS cum see me sometime. ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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i read this with a bit of an impromptu singing rhythm, they kind of feel like lyrics .

Posted 11 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

11 Months Ago

long as you understand and can relate, thanks for the kind review.
I love the blues feel to this. Its real with a story unraveling before the reader. Heartache with stylistic delivery. Nice work.

Posted 11 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

11 Months Ago

I am glad you like the poem and thanks for the review.
I am astonished at how many views and reviews this poem has gotten. I am taking time out to thank my readers.

Roxane D.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Hell, when you're IN Love you ARE IN Love, ain't no "makin' do" niceties.

Posted 11 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

11 Months Ago

So true at times. thanks for the review.
Karma's a b*tch on a bungee string.
I'll be the last woman to sing, "You're still a girl's thrill."

Struck such a chord in me. A lovely, musical poem, fills me with passion and elation!

Posted 11 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

11 Months Ago

yeah it is Karma, n some can't handle it. thanks for the kind review.
Aloha Roxane, a scathing and gutsy write. The band plays on as does life. I love the bluesy feel of this, so on point. Sometimes a girl just needs a new song to sing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

11 Months Ago

Aloha Island Hippy, thanks for the kind write in response.
I definitely feel this one Roxane. You have to swing and sway with the flow, rhythm and musicality of it. Your lines are brilliant- “Karma’s a b*tch on a bungee string.” Every word cutting sharp and true. The player finally gets played. Last line slays. I’m saving this for sure. Superb!


Posted 12 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

11 Months Ago

thanks for the kind review of my poem.
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Zoe
That's sweet. I can feel the love with which you've written this one. So tenderly penned!

Posted 12 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

12 Months Ago

Hey Z, glad you could review n like my poem. thanks
Zoe

12 Months Ago

My pleasure
This poem rolled off the top of my head. I didn't know so many would like it. Thanks! 10-20-17

Posted 12 Months Ago


Baby, lady, oh steady hands and get wavy... Hah, loved this sh*t, just like karma loves to lay us in bricks... Better get a bungee cord before I hit earth... Thrillingly penned...

Posted 12 Months Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

12 Months Ago

thanks for reviewing
Silente

12 Months Ago

Of course, great stuff, thanks again for sharing

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ROXANE DORSEY

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love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..

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