Night Camping

 sit'n pretty as a lily on a pond's pad
finer than a lady's pearl
does the moon hang tight well into the night
feel earth swirl
up howls an owl hoot'n & a toot'n
nutty squirrels 
dangling willows 
bucking deer panting near
plush rabbit ears
spy eyes nearby
coconut grubs to love
ground holes 
mosquitoes nose
camp fire embers
friends
marshmallow wholes

Reviews

[Carola]

nice word imagery of what camping out offers except for the mosquitoes.
(in australia our slang word for them is 'mozzies'

i also read some of your other poems, but didn't comment because i don't understand free verse style at all.

cheerio carola
ps thanks for stopping by to read & comment on my poem 'the age of greyness'

[sette]

the beauty of camping and nature appreciation are two things that a person should experience.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Yes I do agree. Thanks for the kind review and reading of my poem.

[sette]

you are very much welcome