Prevail

Prevail

A Poem by Tabby Mac
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A little encouragement

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Be deliberate
Not desperate
It's dreary out and you feel low
Feel your feelings, and let them go
Validate and contemplate
Stop and evaluate
Then look for the good
Maybe I shouldn't, No, you should
And when you find it hold on tight
Look for more with all your might
Before you know it
You'll have a change of heart
Feeling more together than pulled apart
Take a deep breath and exhale
Take a deep breath and exhale
Now be confident and prevail

© 2017 Tabby Mac



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Tabby Mac
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Hi there. I enjoyed the whole poem and the tight coupling lines. But most of all I liked the repeated penultimate line. We can all get pretty stressed, and it wouldn't harm to repeat that line mantra-like lots of times. If you're interested in motivational messages, I did a poem called 'Striding Edge' which you might like.

Nice work!
Nigel

Posted 1 Month Ago


such a great reminder! Love the positivity, creativity and tone! All you share is fabulous!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

2 Months Ago

Thank you Rosalee! Grateful for you!
Tabby
took two deep breaths and felt better!
will read some more!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

4 Months Ago

You made me giggle. I love to encourage and it encourages me when others are encouraged. Thank you f.. read more
Patrick

4 Months Ago

giggling can only, ever, always be a good thing. Mine is more of a overly loud laugh that i have to .. read more
Tabby Mac

4 Months Ago

Now that is funny!! Hearing a good laugh is almost as laughing itself...I have enjoyed your descript.. read more
I can feel the encouragement like a warm blanket on my shoulders.

"You'll have a change of heart."

I really appreciate that line. This is really good keep up the good work!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

Very grateful you stopped by! And I am happy to hear you found a comfort in this piece!! You have en.. read more
Tabby - you know I love your poems, but you also know that time is tight for me. So I came across this piece and the motivation, inspiration, the feeling of 'I can do it' which was written between the lines was so uplifiting for me to have read. What made it more special was that it was penned by you. Your pieces, in one way or another always rock. Thanks for this stunning, uplifting piece, but most of all - thank you for sharing. It means a lot to me to see something like this.

Mark.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

It's always a good day when you stop by Mark! It's an honor to uplift you! Glad you liked this one. .. read more
matrixmark

5 Months Ago

YOU are AWESOME SAUCE. YOUR WORK has UPLIFTED me today. It's just what I needed.

As a.. read more
Feel the feeling. Yes Ma'am! And now breath.
I love it Tabby. This was really great- very uplifting of I must say.
Your biggest fan!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

WOWOW! Biggest fan! I'm not sure I knew I had fans! I am grateful for you and this AWESOME review!! .. read more
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Taz
This is awsome! I love the rhyme scheme! This is such a powerful poem! Very well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

Thank you Taz!I appreciate you stopping by and I am grateful for the encouragement!
Tabby
Wow this is such a good poem to start my day!
I just loved the flow in each line and each rhyme!

Thank you for sharing Tabby! ^^

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

YAY! I'm glad you liked it and found it encouraging! I am grateful for your encouragement too! It is.. read more
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Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

hehe my pleasure!
Im glad you started yor day good ^^
I think this is a lot of encouragement, Tabby. To all those feeling low, hearing these words being said gives a boost up indeed. That feeling that all is not yet lost..
I loved the feel of this write. Pure positivity. 👍

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

Yay! Thank you! That's what I was going for! I appreciate you and your thoughts!!
Tabby
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

You're welcome, Tabby. A pleasure always 😊

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