To My Wind

To My Wind

A Poem by Tabby Mac
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A love poem for my husband

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You are my wind

I am your sail
In the stillness I await your exhale

I'm confident in your love
As I sit waiting,
anticipating

You fill me up, up, up

Proudly I slice through oceans deep
When my sails your wind does meet

I wondered once what I could give back to you


But it is clear as the day
It is what I can do, not say


I will stand here waiting with faith
Because tho I long to hear your words of affirmation
Your wind is my gift, and answers my anticipation

"I love you." Whispers the wind, " I do!"
 "My acts not words are how I show you."


Forgive my thoughts and selfishness
My fears and self-righteousness
You are my wind
I am your sail

© 2017 Tabby Mac



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"Mushy'?
Hardly, Tabby …
What man with an ounce of warm blood pumping his veins would not slave to receive such a heavenly devotional from his woman?
I certainly cannot answer that!
If anyone were to ever have a question about your capacity to love, your ability to express it, or how the power of it would embrace the heart and soul, sweeping it spiraling away … they have but to breathe the amazing sweetness fuming off this brilliantly metaphorically-rich piece to assure them otherwise.
Your hubby's heart must have danced out of his breast with enthrallment upon reading this … I know mine did.
Throw a breath-stopping picture above it, make the font Times, or something soft in italics, add a warm color, and take that silly "Mushy" disclaimer off … this is sheer romance of the most glorious kind … ummm, time to read it again, and again, and … !

Thank you, lovely poetess, for setting the page softly and warmly aglow with your amazing heart … hugs! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

7 Months Ago

You are sincerely welcome, Tabby.
Suhana

7 Months Ago

Great choice of words.
Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

Thank you!



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Another brilliant rhyming poem, loved it. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

4 Months Ago

Thank you Lykos! I am grateful for your encouragements!
Tabby
Lykos

4 Months Ago

Your welcome
What a tender message of love! Your husband is a lucky man.
The words you used are so soft and delicate; so lovely.
Compliments for your poem, it's very beautiful.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

5 Months Ago

Thank you for encouraging me!
Tabby
This is so honest, so tender and so easy to read. none of this cryptic weird stuff lol i'm sure he would love to hear you reading this it him. great writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

6 Months Ago

I'm simple! LOL thank you Patrick for your kind words of encouragement!
Tabby
"I will stand here waiting with faith
Because tho I long to hear your words of affirmation
Your wind is my gift, and answers my anticipation"

...they say behind every good man is a good woman. What a beautiful gift this is, Tabby.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

6 Months Ago

I'm grateful for your kind words! Very encouraging, thank you!
Tabby
Fair enough. Well done. I'm sure there are more specific reviews below... just know that I liked it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it and that you stopped by to say it! Much appreciated! Thank you!!
Tabby.. read more
Dead Alive Dave

6 Months Ago

The picture you included is also spectacular.
Love for your soulmate is a force of nature- his wind to your sails, the yin and the yang expressed lyrically and beautifully.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

6 Months Ago

That is the beauty of love. That one understands the ebbs and flows of it. There are times when we h.. read more
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WoodenChair

6 Months Ago

The poems excellent, i love the poem, you have a real talent

oh my gosh this is so sweet.. what a lovely job you did here Tabby I really enjoyed this!

this is right up my alley.. fantastic, set me off on a nice course for the day!


Posted 7 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed and that it encouraged you! You encouraged me! Thank you!!
Tabby
Antonio Valentino

7 Months Ago


you are very welcome I am becoming quite a fan of your's..

have a great day!<.. read more
Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

Yay! Thank you very much! I'm excited to be making so many friends!! Very grateful!
Tabby
' "I love you." Whispers the wind, " I do!" '

You create such a magical scene here.. tis not only a poem but a canvas showing the most beautiful love story, of yearning, of giving.

It's touched me so much.. sighhh.

(Having to add that the painting is perfect)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

YAYAY! Thank you Emma joy! Your encouragement means so much!
Tabby
This is a poem that sighs are made for...beautiful thoughts, filled with emotion. The perfect romantic poem. One of my favs by you :) Julie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

That is a huge compliment! Thank you Julie!
Grateful,
Tabby
Oh this is beautiful. :) x

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

Thank you!! I appreciate your thoughts!
Tabby

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