Whats she's doing...

An expressive poem, hot off his pressed thumb! x

 

She’s looking down the barrel
of the most beautiful future.
She’s twinkling in his minds thigh.

 

 

*Thanks to red hot chillies

 

Reviews

[Akroma]

Strange twist, I'm digging it.

[kurrupted]

ooooh! yeah! this piece is hot and all i could say right now is "the new phase?"...please bring it on.

this time am the one that/s smiling at you.

[Night Edge]

Love that last line. It's a delightful little play on words.
Can't wait to see more of this 'new phase'.

Stealing your fresh vegetables, Edgey

[Little_bill]

Hi Tai, yep, love it. That last line, last word actually, totally unexpected. Seems to me you had fun writing this and yeah, love the RCP. Regards Lb

[Rapterj]

new phase, eh? i am intrigued for more.