Humans

It is about how human will grow, and continue.

Humans
Complete failure
What's happening?
Is it because of...
Kings?
President?
Citizens?
No...
Are we destined to fail?
Is it that we specialize in wars?
Is it because we're violent?
Are we weak?
Accept it
We're weak, normal
But..
We have will
Will of the weak
We trained our eyes, ears, and
the ability to think
We gained experience
Achieved the unachievable
Rejoice!
As you are the most talented
Precisely, we are weak
But, talented
You are talented!

Author's Note

I just want honest opinions.

Reviews

[Autonomous]

Nice message but to be honest I felt like you didn't carry out your full potential, I'm sorry if it's not specific enough to you but I believe if you reflect in your innermost self you will find that your writing can blossom into a much more beautiful and concise work. Other then that I liked it, plus I can't hate on a Tokyo Ghoul fan.