I am leaving you

I am leaving you

A Poem by Anonymous Girl
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I wrote this poem when we were moving from the city we were living in, so while travelling I just jotted down what came to me. Enjoy!!

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We are migrating,
Leaving you.
It was amusingly pleasant.
And full of adventure and thrill.
Living in this
Admirable and delightful city
Was best part of my life.

I am happy we are leaving
Because we will be around
Our close ones.

However, I am sad we are leaving
Because you gave us a life
Full of bliss and cheer.

Although I am leaving you,
I will miss you
Badly.
Because you have so many memories
That I hold in my brain.

I am leaving you
But, I will miss you
Badly.


© 2012 Anonymous Girl



Author's Note

Anonymous Girl
Please do review. Critiques are accepted. Hope you like it :)
Enjoy!! ^.^

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I think you definitely captured the spirit of moving away. I have done that way too many times and I am actually in the process of it again. I was wondering if I would write something about the experience someday, okay not really wondering, more so formulating the right words. I love this write. Great job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous Girl

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
I know how it feels like to move. I have moved so many times as well. Right now i a.. read more



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I think you definitely captured the spirit of moving away. I have done that way too many times and I am actually in the process of it again. I was wondering if I would write something about the experience someday, okay not really wondering, more so formulating the right words. I love this write. Great job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous Girl

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
I know how it feels like to move. I have moved so many times as well. Right now i a.. read more
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Such a nice thinking...it's real i think...i liked + loved it damn...your tittle was nice one two as i saw for your word's....all phrases was wonderful...i liked all phrases...
i'm leaving you...
but i 'll miss you badly...
nice line.........anyway.....i wanted to read it more...but hope you'd continue it...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Awh thank you! Yeah it is true.. :) thanks again! ^^
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4 Years Ago

Ahh...it's cool....
Welcome amie...
Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

:)
oh.well that was touching..that repetition of the last line .that one made it a really nice piece.though i was a bit confused in the first stanza.i mean would you mind explaining me that....but still it's a nice attempt!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Well actually first stanza is directing to both city that we moved from and a friend of mine. But th.. read more
The dark story

5 Years Ago

ohoh.got it.and your welcome
Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

^^

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I love writing. When it comes to writing and I hold my pen I start to write whatever comes in my mind. I also like reading from which I got inspired and started to write different stuff. I love pret.. more..

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