Nature

Nature

A Poem by Anonymous Girl
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I love nature, so I wrote what I feel about nature.

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You love it, don't you
The beauty and strength of it.
You love it
When you are no-where.
A no-where, where it holds you
Strongly to itself.
You love it
When you are alone with it.
You love it
And you don't want to leave.
The delicacy and force
Of nature.
The greenery, the plantation.
The waterfall, the living.
You just love it
And you don't want it to disappear.
It feels like heaven,
A heaven that is so tangible
So tangible that you feel attached to it.
And when you feel attached, you don't want to leave.
You don't want to leave it... Never and Ever.

© 2012 Anonymous Girl



Author's Note

Anonymous Girl
I am crazy about nature and just so love it.
Tell me what you think about it.
Enjoy!

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You're right. I love it!! I could picture my butt propped upon a stone wall with my eyes closed, just breathing long and deep.... that Spring breeze that fills the lungs so easily!! Beautiful poem.... : ) xoxo -Mark

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Glad you love it! Thanks ^^
Patrick Henry

5 Years Ago

I love all of yours. It was confusing to see why I'm not subscribed to you yet!! xoxo -Mark
Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Oh thank you :)
There seemed to be some elegance in the way you portrayed nature that really caught my attention. Perfect expression of the feelings of a nature loving person. Nice Poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
I do love it and I'm really glad that you take nature as a source for inspiration. This made me feel very peaceful and I liked it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Yay! Finally a way to describe the way i feel towards nature! There's this creek that runs through our neighborhood, and I always like to hang out at the spot where it meets the woods in a small trickle of a waterfall. It's absolutely beautiful.

Great job! Keep it up! 100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

You are most welcome for that... I love that book and I am praying for your friend as well :):):)
Westminster Abbey

5 Years Ago

Thanks again. Best of luck to you! :)
Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thanks.. And good luck to you as well :)
I never want nature to disappear!!!!!!
Great writing!!! I love the emotion in it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
You hit the nail on the head, definitely expressing how people feel and hold that connection, when you are away from it, so to speak, it's that longing you have for it and I feel like you shared that in this piece. Love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Yeah never ever.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

True :)
'The greenery, the plantation.
The waterfall, the living.'

i love the feeling of freedom it gives you as well. i liked the original angle to this, nicely expressed very open feelings that let you just love nature without questioning. fantastic.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
I love the nature to but sometimes fail to give it importance...
Good write (:

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Hi.. Okay sure I am about to read it :)
Rhianne Ney

5 Years Ago

thanks i finished Tsukin's book and I'm into yours...
Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Okay.. :)
of course..no one ever can run away from the sublime nature.and those who do.surely never experience the true satisfaction and calmness of the heart......the way you have described and expressed the soul attachment with the nature is sorely true..it is a really very pretty poem.........in my summer holidays..i used to go and study up on the roof .because i love that sweet fragrance in the sky...and those beautiful sun's rays.it all feel so relaxing...and i wish to go back downstairs,i can relate it that line repeated line so easily.great work!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Wow thanks for that long review :)
The dark story

5 Years Ago

hahahahahahah.i didn't wrote that intentionally.......can't help myself when i read something so ni.. read more
Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Lol, right.

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