Always You!

Always You!

A Poem by Anonymous Girl
"

How someone feels when their loved one is gone.

"
I turn everywhere,
To search for you.
North, East, South, West.
You are no-where.
Tell me, Tell me.
Where shall I take a glimpse,
In myself?
Where can you be?

Shout out for me,
And I will run towards you.
I'll give up my self,
Just for you.

My eyes create tears,
With you eternally filling them.
My heart pumps the blood,
With your name written on it.
My mind is entirely of thoughts,
With you always staying in them.
My mouth delivers words,
With you mentioned in them.

You are, you were and you will
Stay in me.
It'll be always you

© 2012 Anonymous Girl



Author's Note

Anonymous Girl
It just suddenly came to me. I don't know where it comes from but I just write it down.
Please review and comment :)
Point out any mistakes. Critiques are accepted :)
Enjoy! xD

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Even though its just on a whim you never cease to move me. Great job again, it touched me!

-Bliss

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thank you Bliss :)
I will read your work as well.. I have been busy this month but now I am fr.. read more
Very beautiful. Excellent job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Akashi

4 Years Ago

You are most certainly welcome.
Nicely penned, great write, IInd last stanza's great in reading and i really enjoyed reading this poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Glad you like it^^ Thank you :)
Another love poem on a whim, great one ^-^

100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

YOu're welcome
I loved it. Dominant word's.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thanks
Acer

4 Years Ago

My pleasure :), your working way is too nice i'd say by your writing.
Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Againa thank you :)
Nice one ... keep writing!!!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Sometimes the pieces that suddenly 'come to us' are the most truthful of our emotions and feelings. I truly thought this was a fantastic write!


Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
It's been said before but this does have a nice flow indeed. Keep it up :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Sam Gregory

4 Years Ago

Np
Very nice flow, very beautiful poem. It could be a song! Great job here!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
The problem is I can't write lyrics :(
'You are, you were and you will
Stay in me.'

there is so much positive energy in this it is almost electric! i loved the flow of language and the way you reached out to him. fantastic.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

5 Years Ago

Thank you.. I dont know where it did it come from but I just wrote it..
Thanks anyways ^^

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