Dark majesty

A song talking about death and its dark embrace

 

Dark majesty

 

A secret passage revealed

Forever becomes your friend

A hidden path into the shadows

Kept alone for you and your sorrows

 

Close your tired eyes

Slip through the empty oceans

Sleep underneath the waves of lies

Singing songs while the master of time leans

 

…

Dark majesty

Yours for eternity

Unspoken mystery

The secrets of insanity

 

Into the darkness within

Where the devils live without a sin

Falling deeper into the light is so thin

 

<Whispered>

"Deeper … Deeper … Deeper…"

 

Dark majesty

Yours for eternity

Unspoken mystery

The secrets of insanity

 

Into the everlasting sleep

Only memories you can keep

Fading faster into the end of the deep

 

<Whispered>

"Faster … Faster … Faster…"

 

Dark majesty

Yours for eternity

Unspoken mystery

The secrets of insanity

 

Into the Black burning flame

Life well played just another game

After you open your mind nothing is the same

… Nothing is the same

<Ends>

Author's Note

Death and its dark embrace! Nothing more to say I guess

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

This sounds like a taunting chant...like I dare you sort of thing.

I love this poem. Its dark weeping calling all to listen and
obey.

I love these stanzas: A secret passage revealed

Forever becomes your friend

A hidden path into the shadows

Kept alone for you and your sorrows



Close your tired eyes

Slip through the empty oceans

Sleep underneath the waves of lies

Singing songs while the master of time leans

They draw the reader into its dark depths...nice job!

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[Katseye]

Beautifully said my dear. Love it.

[Traces]

A topic that many wish to avoid and yet we all face our own kind of demonds. Well done! Holly

[shadadakiya]

wow that was wild hmmmmm im to little i dont want that dark majesty to sneak up on me your a great writer thanks ,

[A.r. Bazian]

illusive, misleading!
yet, simple, and understandable!
as usual! intriguing! like most of your work, you give us something to think about!
you know you should omit the Author's note! coz this piece offers so much article and choices!
its rather somewhat controversial presentations may be arguable! making this piece study material!

i like it!
keep it up!

love and respect!

[Asha Raphael]

sweetie, i love the outcome . . . you always find a way to make it perfect!

[John Stussy]

the first stanza reminds me of the solace of the night when i was pissed after my parents died i went on walks to think and vent instead of doing worse crap. the calm of the night felt exactly how you wrote the first verse. ok now i'll stop talking about my past, and on the poem at hand.
the way you describe death is so very inviting, not the time most fear but rather a good long sleep that is to be looked forward to. a reward, of sorts, after all the stress and bullshit of our lives. but, like any reward, one should not rush to gain that reprieve without having done their bit in the world. great song Tamer. you put music to any of these?

[Pinky]

truly morbidly beautiful, i love it. i used that pic too for one of my poems!!! What an amazing write!

[N3v3r_2_L@t3]

I love it. Morbid as it may be, it portrays a message of...death and all it's glory. Your description of the story automatically pulls me in, because it shows that you have a good vocabulary. Your view on death is more realistic than most of those around you. I think you did a great job on it. Keep it up=]

[Jeannine Saadeh]

good meaning and i love all the rhymes and rhythm u got in here, pleasure to help anytime ;) cuz u know i love reading ur poems