What you have denied (Still working on it!)

What you have denied

Ready to take'em all?
Back against the wall
Take as many before you fall
You just rather die than crawl

Staring down the barrel of a 45
Boom! That was just your life
Shot dead, a memory still alive
Kissing death, edgy lips like a knife
Buried in a grave, loneliness for a wife
Demons you fought, never meant to survive

So many ways to die
No expectations, not even goodbye
Leaving loved ones with a why
Is this a lie or do their eyes really cry?

"He fought bravely and died"
Was it worth the lie you lied?
To her love you should had abide
Leaving early was it worth your pride?
Remember! Someone for you has cried
Whispers of what could and what you have denied

Now dust to dust
Your a part of the past
Memories into rust
Mostly forgotten like an outcast

Author's Note

I am still working on it, so it probably will change alot...

Reviews

[Katseye]

Good so far my dear, can't wait for the finnised peice.

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. your words mourn perceptible and imperceptible losses with a biting conviction ... lives have lost their meaning ... and you say it and how ... wow ...