I am wrong

I am wrong

A Poem by tanaya
"

just venting on my feelings..

"
 

Everything I do

Everything I touch

Everything I attempt

 

Is wrong

 

No matter what it is

No matter where it is

No matter who it is

I am wrong

 

Nothing can please you

Nothing I do is right

 

Even if I am right

Even if I am wrong

Nothing can please you

 

I try

I try

I am wrong

 

They are right

I am wrong

 

You were right

I was wrong

 

I can do no right

They can do no wrong

 

You do not love me

For I am wrong

I get that now

That…

I am wrong

© 2011 tanaya


Author's Note

tanaya
This is a vent and I love comments!!!!

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I have found out that writing under strong emotions is the best time to write. The strong feelings could be felt behind those words. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Purging the emotions is always a healthy thing. While I believe there are times where we all mess up and have to take a long look at what we are doing in life. We shouldn't beat ourselves up over it. :)

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


Keep on trying. Hard to make all people happy. Sometimes must go forward and hope for the best. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Venting can sometimes bring out some truly unique poems... people I know have come up with their best work during a vent session of theirs. I liked this one. Good job

~Erinne

Posted 12 Years Ago



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tanaya
tanaya

Wyoming, NSW, Australia



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