Willow Tree Weeping

Willow Tree Weeping

A Poem by Tania Leigh
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An attempt at a Haiku for a contest

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Willow tree weeping

Tiny leaves dance on tired limbs

Can't you be happy?

 

© 2008 Tania Leigh


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Beautifully done haiku and I love willow trees. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utterly beautiful, a pure and perfect haiku. There is nothing more that could be possibly said, no alternative ideas or phrasing. I'll just think of that said willow tree.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love willow trees...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice!! I love willow trees. Whenever my kids and I see one while we are travelling, we always sing a little song to tell the weeping willow not to cry.
lol
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Big Willow tree fan here! This is so pretty!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

willow trees are one of my favorite trees and this sweet little poem (or is it considered a haiku?) captures the essence of the willow in a limited amount of words

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very soulful and you were able to convey a lot is these short lines! NICE!~B

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is adorable. It fits the nature aspect of Haiku perfectly and is well structured, so fortunately the Haiku police won't be after you! haha. Those Weeping Willows can be quite deceiving. Their limbs look sort of strong. I found out the hard way by trying to play Tarazan once that they don't hold up too well. I ended up in the creek at a church picnic. I really know how to make a Weeping Willow weep! Thanks for bringing all that back and for making me ponder on the happiness of the tree. This is an awesome Haiku for my library of favorites. Good luck in the contest.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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4/7/08 When my "Phobia" contest is completed April 18th, and winners have been chosen and notified, I'll be leaving the cafe indefinitely to focus on my family, as well as my first book and website. .. more..

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