I know a boy

I know a boy .
Who has no shame.
Always smiles at me.
Dont even knowing my name

He is a guy .
Quite different from us.
His favorite dish is .
Caps and chalks.

He stares at me.
Without any reason.
And always helps me.
Without my permission.

He is a guy.
Who didnt know my name
And I know .
He has no shame.

Reviews

[H L Rose]

I think the simplicity of the poem is perfect! It feels very light and authentic. It made my heart flutter as I read it 😊.

Though “has no shy” sounds a bit strange, I think it is an interesting use of language that can fit well in the poem.

I like how we are introduced to a different aspect about the “boy” in each stanza. I don’t really understand the “caps and chalk”, but I know that is probably just my lack of knowledge.

“Always smiles at me./I don’t know why” are my favorite lines!

I did notice in the last stanza “by” should be “bye”.

I loved reading this!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you very much Mam and also thanks for your kind suggestion 😊😊😊

[H L Rose]

Of course! Hope I could be of help!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Mam caps refers to the pen caps and chalks refer to the black board chalk okk . It's strange naa 😄😄😄😄

[H L Rose]

Oh that's interesting! Are you referring to the subject like biting his pen caps? That makes perfect sense. I'm just not paying attention.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Yaa mam biting his caps . He is a unique boy . And you know he also use to eat soil . It's funny naa 😂😂😂

[H L Rose]

😂 lol. Yes that’s funny

[Taniska 😊😊]

😂😂😂😂😂 !!!

[Cyria Writer]

love this poem

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx !!! 😊😊

[Kerdiwen Glass]

Cute and a bit mysterious. I like the innocence in this. Good work.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx a lot mam for your kind words smiles 😊😊

[.]

Reminds me of someone I would never forget... It was similar for a while but then it all ended on a great friendship. 😊

[Taniska 😊😊]

Ohh !! Mam he also use to bite chalks and caps ??

[.]

😂 not chalks but pen caps... Haha.

[.]

We belong to same nation I suppose, I know what you exactly mean. I am 16 and coming across these things are kinda familiar. I had much similar thoughts.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Ohh !! It's quite funny and now how he is 😊😊😊

[.]

Its not always like what we judge about someone. It's my point of view.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Okk , thanx mam for visiting my page smiles 😊😊

[Flowers of Eternity]

My heart flutters as I read your poem,it's cute and very nice to read as well.
Keep up the good work!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Ohh , thanks mam for your kind visit . ((Smiles )) 😊😊😊😊

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice poem, it aslo lowed well. I liked it a lot.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam for visiting my site and I glad that u like it lot ((smiles )) 😊😊😊😊😊

[Taniska 😊😊]

Sorry I got it that u are sir not mam it's my mistake 😋😋😄😄

[NotUsinganymore]

It's fine haha

[Taniska 😊😊]

😄😄😄😄😄😄

[Shweta]

Hey there, the beauty of this poem is its simplicity.. Wonderful work... Keep writing..

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanks mam for your kind words smiles 😊😊😊.

[Siddhidatri Pande]

quite a cute poem...Waiting for your next one.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx siddhidatri for visiting my page smiles😊😊😊😊

[barleygirl]

You have written an intriguing word portrait of that strange kid who is mostly hanging around on the fringes of life, mostly shunned from the other kids, but this narrator is revealing quite a lot about herself as she describes him. I get the feeling she feels a kinship with his weirdness, the way she mentions his favorite dish as if there's nothing strange about that. I believe this poem is a love poem in disguise and the narrator is actually drawn to the strange kid . . . I like the simple but vague way you tell this story (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam for visiting my page but mam this is not a love poem he is just like my friend and here I have written the works that he always use to do and remember this is not a love poem mam (((smiles ))) 😊😊😊

[barleygirl]

I do not mean romantic love. I mean just simple love for another person, for a friend . . .

[Taniska 😊😊]

Hmm that's right he is just like my freind 😄😄😄😄

[Taniska 😊😊]

And sorry for taking it in wrong way 😋

[barleygirl]

No worries! (((HUGS)))

[Taniska 😊😊]

*Smiles* 😄😄😄😄😄

[Chris Shaw]

Sounds to me as though he has a soft spot for you young lady. Sweet poem of innocence.

Chris

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam for visiting my page smiles 😊😊😊