Love you Mommy....

Dear mommy, I love you like a love song... :)

I wonder who is the she...?????

The one who cares me most
And loves me even if I'm a ghost

The one who wipes my tears without hand
And explain morals according to trend

The one who's the first to notice when i leap
And thinks I'm the cutest when I sleep

The one who wastes her morning sleep for my breakfast
And remains awake till i sleep when the day last

The one who hide her tears to avoid my sadness
And bears all alone the hidden loneliness

She is neither a saint nor a legend of the pom pom
She is just my sweetest mom!!.....

Author's Note

Thanks for reading my poem.....hope u liked it

Reviews

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Beautiful, what a sweet declaration of love!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

My pleasure

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Annabelle. Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. You honored your mother and yourself with the amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you, my pleasure,,,,,

[Magnus]

Most beautiful piece I have read dare I say its a master piece! I love my mum and so its just magnific! Permission to post it to her via facebook! I will remember to add your name as author!

[Tasfia Islam]

Sure.... :) Thank you... :) I'm glad u liked it...

[Magnus]

I didn't like it I loved it! :-)

[Geo Lawrence]

its just simple and well written. Good job!

[Tasfia Islam]

thank you .... :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Emotions Are Well Expressed. Lovely

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[armin]

I absolutely liked it. Your poem contains simplicity of words but have deep emotions. I appreciate that.
The one who hide her tears to avoid my sadness
And bears all alone the hidden loneliness
Those were really touching words. But you have to work a bit on poetic styles otherwise you are pretty good at your side. Keep writing, have a nice time.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you..... :)