Forever Young

Forever Young

A Poem by Natasha
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Of my Peter Pan series.

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Pan, she wonders.

Such a mysterious boy,

Coming from a land of always dreaming.

Darling, he wonders.

Such a delirious girl,

Coming from a land of growing old.


Neverland, she whispers,

Where is that?

Second star to the right, he yells,

And straight on til’ morning!


But how do we get there, Peter?

Take me away!

Why, Wendy, we fly of course!

Take my hand!


Let’s fly to the land of never,

Where our worries won’t exist.

Stay here with me, Wendy,

And we can live forever young.

© 2017 Natasha



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so refreshing one... very thoughtful.. beautifully written... liked it a lot

Posted 6 Months Ago


Natasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you.
I really like it. It's a deep twist on a classic light childrens' story

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you!
Diamonds are forever

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t1TcDHrkQYg



Posted 6 Months Ago


We can live forever young.

Such an amazing poem, Natasha.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
One of my favorite childhood stories. I always dreamed of being able to fly away with Peter to Neverland. A lovely vision of what might have been with Peter and Wendy, although I don't think Tinkerbell would approve. :) Nice ink!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you! I plan to write more with Tinkerbell included too.
SJ Mullins

6 Months Ago

Can't wait to read. You are most welcome! :)
What a delightful, mysterious array of fantasy-based lines... I always wished for pixie-dust, myself... Lightly penned...

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you!
Silente

6 Months Ago

Welcome...
first time I'm reading about peter pan and the way you've written it looks fascinating

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you!
I don't find anything new here other than a re-write of the movie/book dialogue, which to me lacks creativity. I'm not picking up what your laying down.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tony Jordan

6 Months Ago

I'm good mate but there's a profound sense of shock here after Manchester. :(
Book of condole.. read more
Gee

6 Months Ago

Terrible. Holly has been to see Bruno Mars recently with mum, makes me shudder.
Targeting kid.. read more
Tony Jordan

6 Months Ago

Calculated to do exactly that mate...awful.
I'm picking up what you're laying down about Peter Pan.
So, this is a series of thoughts?

Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Sort of. They are crying out to each other. The first stanza is really thoughts, but then they are m.. read more
You made the tale. Sweet and nice dear Natasha. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to hopeful ending. Would be good if we knew the happy endings in real life. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Months Ago

Very true, thank you!
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome Natasha.

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Tags: Peter Pan, Love, Wendy, Neverland, Star, Forever, Young

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