Ruined

Ruined

A Poem by Natasha

Heartless,

Is what you made me.

Numb,

Is what you made me feel.


Hope,

Is what you made me lose.

Love,

Is what you made me hate.


On and on, I can go.

About how you ruined me.



© 2017 Natasha



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A rant-esque styled run at things... Makes you definitely want to just matter of fact tell the subject your grievances... On and on, heh... Nicely penned

Posted 3 Days Ago


Natasha

3 Days Ago

Thank you so much for your feedback!
Silente

2 Days Ago

You are so welcome...!
Damn, kick his a*s already! I'm mad at him and I don't even know him....
Good job.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

2 Weeks Ago

This made me laugh a lot! I wish I could! Thank you so much :))
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N.
Such sad piece. It is the cry of a broken heart.


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

2 Weeks Ago

It is indeed. Thank you:)
Hi Natasha, sad words but full of meaning and a nice flow to your poem .

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you much
Your words whispered a tale of love lost and heart broken. I liked the flow of thoughts. Dear Natasha, you made the reader understand the pain and the lost. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Natasha

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, I appreciate your review
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Short but a with a rhythm that glues.
Good poem Natasha:)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you much!
Interesting. I think a lot of people can relate to that feeling.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Natasha

2 Weeks Ago

I totally agree

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Added on October 2, 2017
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Tags: Poem, Ruined, Love, Heartless, Heartbreak

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