God and I Talk

God and I Talk

A Poem by Tate Viviano
"

Now I use God as a word to describe my diety. My God may not be your God and that is okay.

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God and I talk

rarely.

I try not to trouble

God with my sorrows.

God has enough to

worry about.

But when I humble

my pride at times.

We will sit for hours/days

pouring out my fears/wounds

joys/concerns/my questions.

My self.

And God replies with

the rising of the sun.

My Child today is

here, take away all your

fears of tomorrow

all your wounds from

yesterday.

Live in TODAY!

I made it for you.

And I weep.


© 2017 Tate Viviano



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A line that really spoke to me was the one about God having enough to worry about. Its interesting that one can feel like a bother to God a times, and that our worries may be trivial in the grand scheme of things. One critique I have is the punctuation is a little choppy, but maybe that was intentional?

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tate Viviano

10 Months Ago

Hey thanks for reading and that is one of my favorite lines as well. Ya know when I sit down to talk.. read more



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A line that really spoke to me was the one about God having enough to worry about. Its interesting that one can feel like a bother to God a times, and that our worries may be trivial in the grand scheme of things. One critique I have is the punctuation is a little choppy, but maybe that was intentional?

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tate Viviano

10 Months Ago

Hey thanks for reading and that is one of my favorite lines as well. Ya know when I sit down to talk.. read more
Fantastic piece ... you really captured the conversation, it felt real from the heart... and the end line was perfect!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tate Viviano

10 Months Ago

Aww thanks so much it means alot! Glad you liked it!
Hebe

10 Months Ago

Your welcome ...keep writing :)
Tate Viviano

10 Months Ago

Again thank you so much for that support. Always makes me happy to hear. You also keep it up, just r.. read more

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Added on January 15, 2017
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Tags: God, Mysticism, Love

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Tate Viviano
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I am twenty three and have been really writing poetry and stories since I was eighteen. I enjoy the poetry of the Sufi's as well as the greats such as Maya Angelou. I am so excited to share my work an.. more..

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