Screaming Mind, Whispering Heart

Screaming Mind, Whispering Heart

A Poem by Kiara

Putting mind over heart,
I break myself.
LEAVE HIM ALONE!
HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU!
JUST ACCEPT IT!
(I love him....)
I keep my heart a whisper,
My mind a shout,
And I watch you
As you go be happy
(Forever without me....)

© 2012 Kiara


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Short, concise,sad but very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i'm sorry Ki that you feel this way, but your writing is so beautifully expressed through your words, so very nice job there. i'm definitely adding this one to my favorites because how i can relate so closely to this write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautifully written. So many guys (probably) feel the same way about girlfriends and/or boyfriends. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes it's hard to forget about the one you love most. But there are sooooo many other guys out there that will love you and care about you. You just have to find the right ones who will do that for you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..

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