Hello Again

This is just the result of alcohol, a bad mood, and horror movies. Wanted to write a shock and awe type piece

There will be no compromise

for everytime you lied

straight to my face

I'll seek my vengeance

in a masterful way

for when you fall

into sleep's embrace

a nightmare you'll find

with a familiar face

bearing a twisted smile

you son of a b***h

it's been awhile

would tasting this mace

finally make you smile

no no no ive got a better idea

trick you into

your favorite poison

let you pass out

thinking it was night's end

but you're such a fool

and it was all plan

shock you awake

in the middle of the night

beat you to a pulp

in a one side fight

drag you to the table

and grab my scythe

cut through the skin

straight to the bone

drag it slowly

to hear your pain filled moan

starting at your neck

donw to the abdomen

the a hammer falls to the chisel

opening your chest

rip out every organ

cannibal taste test

throw them in your face

and when im done with the rest

clutch your heart

lift it out of your chest

devour one half

and crush the rest

stare into your eyes

while only your black soul is left

feed you to the wolves

my closest family yet

there will be no compromise

Author's Note

like i said its supposed to be just a little shock and awe horror thing, but yeah let me know what yall think

Reviews

[jay-lyse]

I really enjoyed the imagery and smoothness of it all. Good Write.

[Maya Storm]

I am into horror, dark humour and all that so liking this was way too easy for me. For being drunk the flow on this was very fluid. I like the imagery you painted
"beat you to a pulp
in a one side fight
drag you to the table
and grab my scythe
cut through the skin"

This is extremely self deprecating I wish the title of this was more in tune with the piece I expected something softer with "Hello Again". Overall I really enjoyed reading this.