Green Eyes

Green Eyes

A Poem by Taz
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I know a girl with bright green eyes but she is silent, like me and my green eyes.

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They can look
Deep inside
They can seek
And try to find
Behind the wall
That blocks all spies
They will search
But few will find
The story behind
Your true
Green Eyes

© 2017 Taz



Author's Note

Taz
This I have made for a girl who I barely know but I know also hides what I do.

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I like this. It's short and to the point but it evokes imagination.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you.
Hidden in plain site. Perhaps a friendship worth pursuing. Trust is a valuable commodity. :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you for reviewing.
Oh...wow...short but so deep and emotive. A touch of sadness and hope in there too. I found it beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank You for reading and reviewing
Tina H.W.

8 Months Ago

My pleasure :)
What do you have behind those eyes

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

More than you will ever know.
A well written poem about the walls we build to hide what is inside us. It is short but powerful.

Well done

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you to tell you the truth I just started writing and it just went from there, this was not pla.. read more
H.L. Cerveise

8 Months Ago

Some poems are planned and others are not that is how it works for me and I think many other Warrior.. read more
Taz

8 Months Ago

Honestly I do not really plan anything I just write what comes to my mind when I think of certain th.. read more
Short and sweet... Short and powerful...Short and engaging...
Keep on writing...

Posted 8 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you I will
I love this. It was short, and it enraptured me. You have truth behind your poems. Your words help me more than you know. I understand what blocking it out (everything) feels like. AMAZING, just amazing.

Always, Gina

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taz

8 Months Ago

I have just made another
That's true. No one can understand the pain and suffering one goes through. I liked it. Very true and thoughtful.

Posted 8 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 18, 2017
Last Updated on March 27, 2017
Tags: Understanding, secrets, walls, eyes

Author

Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 17 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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