Sunup-Sundown

Sunup-Sundown

A Poem by Taz
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Just my thoughts.

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A beautiful day, 
sunup-sundown,
 A tireing way, 
I hide the frown, 
That always seems, 
to come around,
 On a beautful day,
 sunup-sundown

© 2017 Taz



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Taz
It is comeing from my mind...

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The day shall be repeated. I liked the old wisdom. New day, new opportunity to do something worthwhile and fun. Thank you Taz for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


The repetition is really good and the poem was also lovely. A good job :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Taz

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.
Sofia

6 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
I like the repetition; I feel like it's part of what makes this poem as good as it is. Great work.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Taz

6 Months Ago

Thanks, I am really grateful for everyones kind reviews
i like the repetition and such,reminds me of some of my older poems, good work

Posted 6 Months Ago


Taz

6 Months Ago

Thank You.
Simple yet beautiful. Like a cup of coffee. Tyfs!

Posted 6 Months Ago


wow. very simple but yet very true and touching. excellent job.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Taz

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Darling poem. Spelling corrections needed; however, it is adorable. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Taz

6 Months Ago

Thank you for pointing out there are spelling mistakes, I literally made this at about 1:00 this mor.. read more
A tireing way, I hide the frown,....
Simple but a good...:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Very simple and sweet. There should be space between sun up and sun down don't you think ?

Posted 6 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

Yeah......
Taz

6 Months Ago

Ok thank you for your input.
Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

You're welcome

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Added on March 21, 2017
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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 16 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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