Sunup-Sundown

Sunup-Sundown

A Poem by Taz
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Just my thoughts.

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A beautiful day, 
sunup-sundown,
 A tireing way, 
I hide the frown, 
That always seems, 
to come around,
 On a beautful day,
 sunup-sundown

© 2017 Taz



Author's Note

Taz
It is comeing from my mind...

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The day shall be repeated. I liked the old wisdom. New day, new opportunity to do something worthwhile and fun. Thank you Taz for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


The repetition is really good and the poem was also lovely. A good job :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Taz

10 Months Ago

Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.
Sofia

10 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
I like the repetition; I feel like it's part of what makes this poem as good as it is. Great work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Taz

10 Months Ago

Thanks, I am really grateful for everyones kind reviews
i like the repetition and such,reminds me of some of my older poems, good work

Posted 10 Months Ago


Taz

10 Months Ago

Thank You.
Simple yet beautiful. Like a cup of coffee. Tyfs!

Posted 10 Months Ago


wow. very simple but yet very true and touching. excellent job.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Taz

10 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Darling poem. Spelling corrections needed; however, it is adorable. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Taz

10 Months Ago

Thank you for pointing out there are spelling mistakes, I literally made this at about 1:00 this mor.. read more
A tireing way, I hide the frown,....
Simple but a good...:)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Very simple and sweet. There should be space between sun up and sun down don't you think ?

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

Yeah......
Taz

10 Months Ago

Ok thank you for your input.
Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

You're welcome

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Added on March 21, 2017
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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 16 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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