Internal Music

Internal Music

A Poem by Taz
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I was told to write something happy...

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The music that lives, 
Within the soul,
As precious as, 
A mothers hold,
A child somewhere, 
Was born today,
Her love and happy, 
There to stay,
Forever more, 
The music will play,
And forever within, 
Her residence stay 
Making her smile, 
Every day.

© 2017 Taz


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This is simple elegance and poetically penned. The brevity of the piece captures perfectly magnitude of one of life's miracles, I also love that you drew the music analogy out, underlying the piece. The best part of me is a momma to a wee man, so this is deeply felt! Well done. Regards Ray

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank You. I am glad it spoke to you.



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So Perfect and creative ❤ love it!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is quite nice :)
music is a wonderful thing, that allot of people enjoy.
I like how you have written about music being part of such a precious moment.
well written :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

It is more of the music that plays within your head while being happy, you must be mindful of it.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Oh ok :)
Well none the less good poem :)
Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank You.

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Added on March 23, 2017
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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 17 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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