That One Kid

That One Kid

A Poem by Taz
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A short truthful one :)

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There is a boy
Inside my class
He moves around
I dunno if he'll pass
He talks a lot
Annoying at best
I heard him once cuss
It was during a test
He needs to learn more
And talk a lot less

© 2018 Taz


Author's Note

Taz
There is always one of these in every class lol.

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I like your style. The economy of it. There are no extra words here. I can go through each sentence and not find a single word that can be removed while maintaining the integrity of the ideas. Except maybe the last sentence. In the last sentence "a lot" can be removed to leave a simple three word sentence.
I love that. Keep writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


very nice i am that one kid

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ashe Conten

7 Years Ago

Same.. I used to be.
Lol! Every class all over the world has that one kid. Well, kids of each kind- talkative, conservative, funny...
Thank you for sharing !!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading I am happy you liked it.

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Added on March 27, 2017
Last Updated on May 14, 2018

Author

Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



About
I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 17 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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