My girl

My girl

A Poem by Taz
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This is for my girlfriend.

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My girl
I hope we last, my girl
I hope we prosper, my girl
I hope for the future, my girl
I hope for the love, my girl
I hope we survive, my girl
I hope we live, my girl
Forever...

© 2018 Taz


Author's Note

Taz
It's a new spontaneous idea. Hope Y'all like it!

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Nice job, Taz! I like this "spontaneous idea." Your anaphora really makes the point clear in a beautiful way. It's simple, yes, but effective.

James

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 17 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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