YOU CAN DO IT!

Doodle

You are not born to live

.Like a slave.

*You are a leader*

_A leader of your desires_

Not fantasies

You are born to be FREE

­…To be what you want to be…

“Be the change”

You have brains

In your head

You have feet

In your shoes

Go your destination

For the control is

In your hands

You’re the fish

The fish that can’t climb a tree

You’re the fish

That rules every breathe of the sea

DON’T GET DEPRESSED

Depressed out of lowliness

Or surely your assets would perish

So don’t let the SMILE on your face

Fade away

Be the ‘moon’

The leader of the twinkling stars

In the sky; the universe

DO NOT LOSE HOPE

Hope like the light of sun

The sun that shines everyday

With a deafening glow

That takes away the pale looks

And gifts to us

 Shining faces

AN OBSTACLE

IS A STEPPING STONE

BUT DISTRACTIONS

ARE DEVASTATIONS

DON’T RUN

AFTER  SUCCESS

SEARCH  FOR

EXCELLENCE

FOR $MONEY IS NOT

EVERYTHING

BUT THE UNIVERSE IS MADE OF

LOVE & BELIEF

So say with me

A magical word

“I CAN DO IT”

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

This is something I think everyone needs to see because this tells the unrestrained truth about how we live our lives. We always look at our mistakes or dwell on our failures, but if we try to build onto our strengths and tell ourselves "I can do it"... It could change our entire attitude, even if they are just four words. You are such an inspiring person that has so much hope. Great job!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Glad to hear from you! I absolutely agree with your views and this is what this simple poem is crafted for. Although I just wrote it randomly when I was feeling low in my classroom. You know, It gives me sort of encouragement.
Thank you so much:::))
Cheers

[Taino]

Outstanding! Perseverance, hope, defiance against the odds! You've created a powerful message. The greatest teacher is failure I once heard.

Very well done.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Taino for an insightful , encouraging review! I appreciate it!

[Haneefah]

I AM UNIQUE
I BELIEVE IN ME
THE SUCCESS IS RIGHT IN ME BUT BY HARD WORK AND DETERMINATION WILL BRING IT OUT TO THE WORLD.
I CAN DO IT.
NICE WRITE DEAR.

[Haneefah]

I AM UNIQUE
I BELIEVE IN ME
THE SUCCESS IS RIGHT IN ME BUT BY HARD WORK AND DETERMINATION WILL BRING IT OUT TO THE WORLD.
I CAN DO IT.
NICE WRITE DEAR.

[Chase Dylan]

Well I stepped away from this with a much bigger smile on my face... Also a much wider net of inspiration cast... Hard work and fun! Yes I can...

[Ashwin Shanker]

Go your destination - Go to your destination...

Apart from this sentence, I enjoyed reading this heart-warming poem and the message is brilliant. I am definitely inspired.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you! You're greatly appreciated!

[Chris]

"Doodles are the voice of the world..."

It is fun to enhance our "inner" voice visually - but overdoing takes away from our intent - it distracts a reader from what you are trying to express. You've a thought-full piece here.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Yes, I absolutely agree with you.
Thank you for the constructive review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes i think we are more afraid to succeed than to fail....so we stay within our comfort zone and miss the chance for greatness---
j.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

That's true! A really bold statement!
' or maybe we are not always ready for a change.'
read moreThat's true! A really bold statement!
' or maybe we are not always ready for a change.'
Thank you sir for reviewing!

[Paul Bell]

Those four words are actually the most important words in anyone's life. The tools to freedom.
'I CAN DO IT'

[Tazeen Ahmed]

absolutely, they are a magical spell.
Thank you so much Paul for taking the time to read!read moreabsolutely, they are a magical spell.
Thank you so much Paul for taking the time to read!

[Ghania]

Wow! A booster for making one determined!
Loved it. We do need a piece of advice like that to continue with passion and to work hard. Very Well-written. :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much for the encouraging review!:)

[Ghania]

You're welcome. :))