Our Love Is...

Our Love Is...

A Poem by T. Edana Talbott




















You and I are a nightmare.

The love you gave isn’t fair,
You shouldn’t pretend to care.

You aren’t here,
Probably not there,
And I just need you to hear..

Our love is... a memory,
Full of only meaningless apologies.
You don’t love me, for me...
But for what she used to be.

If you walk out that door,
You and I are no more…

Should you lie one more time,
My love will say goodbye.

If I hear “sorry” again,
Darling this is our end.

Our love is... a memory,
Full of only meaningless apologies.
You don’t love me, for me..
But for what she used to be.

I thought we were a dream,
But things are never what they seem... 

I thought we were a dream,
But things are never what they seem... 

I thought we were a dream,
But things are never what they seem... 

© 2016 T. Edana Talbott



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I think few really have tasted love or have come close.... The world has become closed minded and passion and romance forgotten. You wrote a very eloquent piece displaying your emotions with good imagery. Keep writing, I look forward to more...

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T.  Edana Talbott

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much



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I think few really have tasted love or have come close.... The world has become closed minded and passion and romance forgotten. You wrote a very eloquent piece displaying your emotions with good imagery. Keep writing, I look forward to more...

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T.  Edana Talbott

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
Very sad, and evokes heartbreak pain... I can feel the melancholic tune in my mind after reading the poem... Our sad it is that people love us by thinking that we are someone else that they used to love before us... There is nothing more painful in love than this, a relationship cannot stand only on lies and apologies... After sometime it becomes horrible for the one who truly dreamed about the relationship... So well presented work frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


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T.  Edana Talbott

1 Year Ago

I could not agree more, lies and apologies are not what makes a fulfilling and long lasting relation.. read more

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Added on July 13, 2016
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Tags: love, sadness, heartbreak, breakups

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T.  Edana Talbott
T. Edana Talbott

El Cajon, CA



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"Sometimes when i look up I see stars that cut through the sky and fade quickly into nothingness and i pray that you aren't as fleeting, because when we're lying in roads i get the same feeling .. more..

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