Elation

Just chillin' on a Friday night.

I hear the swishing of the dishwasher machine~
  right now it sounds like ocean waves to me.
And the light bulb in the hallway
  shines as beautiful as the sun.

My cat is a black panther, an exotic night stalker
  attacking his natural-born pray~  the teddy bear.

This old couch is white and worn~
  yet I imagine I’m sitting on a cloud in a sky
so full with the flow of chilled air,
  like the one coming from my a/c vent.

No, I’m not on drugs, just in a great mood.
  I’m happy, and peaceful, and thinking of you.

YG

Reviews

[Viki Rachel]

I love optimistic poems such as this, when normal household objects become something so elusive and special. I love the last stanza. I'm trying to acheive this same happiness, and it's slowly looking up. But anyway, great poem! I really enjoyed this.

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how uplifting...

[rwar ish me]

this is very sweet. a good poem

[chemicacl romance]

this is a great poem!!

[Lighthouse Call]

Wonderful write! I love it.
Heh, up to
This old couch is white and worn~
yet I imagine I’m sitting on a cloud in a sky

I thought, she's on trip or something.
Next two lines, bang you reply.
Haha! Excellent one! Loved the ending.

[Alexa Aiden]

This makes me extremely happy! What a light, fun poem! Every line is brilliant! "No I'm not on drugs, just in a great mood.
I'm happy, and peaceful, and thinking of you"

:D

[Randolf Ramos]

This is the key to a happy life, finding beauty in every moment in life.

[M. Elizabeth.]

wow, It's fantastic how you change such regular things into magic :)
I love this poem, And my favourite bits are: My cat is a black panther, an exoctic stalker attacking his natural-born pray- the teddy bear.
and: No, im not on drugs, just in a great mood
I'm happy, and peaceful and thinking of you :)

great write, m. elizabeth