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The Others (1st Draft)

The Others (1st Draft)

A Book by E. R. Patient

Humans are inferior. They do not belong in Adromeda. An ancient species, the Order, abducted their ancestors from Earth centuries ago. Now Telkan journeys to the ancient ruins where it all started.


© 2016 E. R. Patient

Author's Note

E. R. Patient
This is only the first draft, so any critiques are not only welcomed, but wanted. Please give feedback on what you think of the story, plot, characters, ect. Grammar edits are also greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy reading this book.

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Added on June 13, 2016
Last Updated on June 13, 2016
Tags: space, spaceships, adventure, misfits, travel, aliens, time travel, future technology


E. R. Patient
E. R. Patient


Hey everyone. I am different. I'm not the only one in my head. Hence the name ...' R- I love to read and watch tv. I get my exercise by taking martial arts. I love space, and have an avid curiosit.. more..